Monday, July 27, 2009

What Is Brave?

This is an example of a free- choice narrative. The class voted on the two stories that they would like added to the classroom Blog.

Amy was a poor little girl. When she was 8 years old her parent were in a car crash and they died. After that Amy was very worried. She couldn't find any family like her Grandfather or Grandmother because they were all in England so Amy was by herself in Finland.

After a few months, she found a job of as a dishwasher. Poor Amy got hurt by her ugly big bad mad boss because one time she accidently dropped the bowl and the boss angily shouted, "How STUPID are you! Do you know that bowls cost lots of money, don't you know that!"

When iher parent died she had forgotton she had a sister! She spent three months trying to find her sister. But then she heard that people say her sister was in England with her Grandparents. They all thought that Amy had died the same as her parents.

Amy had nowhere to sleep and she cried. Then she had a headache when she cried. She had to sleep on the footpath beside the rubbish bin.

"YOU SHOULD BE BRAVE AMY!" someone was talking to Amy.
"Who are you?" asked Amy.
"I'm your Dad! I'm sorry that I left you alone."
"DAD!!!I miss you so much Dad! The boss hurt me and I have nowhere to sleep!" cried Amy.
"Amy you're 11 years old now you should be brave, you can stay by yourself."
Then Amy's Dad disappeared ...

"AAAAAAAA!!!Don't leave me Dad!"The hole street can heard the Amy is shouting."hohohoho." Amy breathe hardley.When Amy wake up, she just notice that is a dream but Amy didn'y forgot what her Dad says:"YOU SHOULD BE BRAVE!".

Amy start looking a new job.She found a job of looking after children like kindergarten. Then her boss saw that Amy was really good at singing. Amy loved singing, she always sang to the children. Then the boss decided that Amy might as good as a super star singer!!!

After the boss took Amy to the TV progarm of SING SING SING! Ther manager took a test from Amy and they realiased she did have a beautiful voice!

After three years Amy became a famous Girl in Finland. She still remembers that her Dad said, " YOU SHOULD BE BRAVE!"

J.L

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